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On the trail in Wyoming, May 2008
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May 2008

8:25 pm Wednesday
May 14, 2008

No backtalk

Play Rough, Fight Dirty
by McGehee

 

Wednesday evening: new content.

I enjoy writing fiction because I enjoy creating characters and developing the chemistry among them. The best part is knowing that as each character is true to what he is about, his relationship with other characters will be influenced by that as well as by them. And as a given character interacts with newer ones, the way he relates to previously introduced characters offers a guide to how he should interact with a new one. And it can be fun to make readers stop and wonder, when one character responds to another in a way you hadn’t led them to expect.

Which points to another aspect of writing characters: if they aren’t a work in progress, they’re not real. They’re not so much a character in a story as a plot device designed to move the actual character in your desired direction. I find a lot of walking, talking plot devices in passable but mediocre fiction, especially genre fiction. The best and worst of these, interestingly enough, generally influence the plot by responding to a character or situation in a way the reader has not been led to expect. So a writer has to be careful. It’s especially challenging when the line is so thin between a transparent plot device wearing the mask of a character, and an actual character in a character-driven story.

I enjoy creating characters. Which means my stories will at least try to be character-driven, even when perhaps that may not be my intention. And frustration for me comes when my characters derail the plot by behaving in a way I’ve found to be more true to themselves than to the story I’m trying to tell. Damned, willful characters.

I’ve tried before to write stories (example (I can give Wiley Calhoun’s father a different career without compromising his character.), reference) based on various versions of the characters I’m bringing out in this one. I like them. Their relationship has actually become strongly formed in my concepts of them beyond anything I ever actually wrote for any of them. Here, I try writing about that relationship, just to see what story they want to tell.

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11:07 pm Tuesday
May 13, 2008

No backtalk

From the LITTLE SPRINGS POST-RECORD: May 23, 1880
by McGehee

 

The preceding August, some cowboys who’d had trouble in the West Fork country sold off their stock and pulled out.

Apparently their involvement in the West Fork country wasn’t quite at an end.

(This is for continuity’s sake, to make it plausible that descendants of some of these guys might be in Clearwater more than a century later.)

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February 2008

12:44 pm Wednesday
February 13, 2008

6 talked back!

Dark Heart
by McGehee

 

An idea for a story can come to me in any number of ways. For this one, I thought about supernovas, and how it might be desirable in a future, spacefaring era, to be able to tell when one is going to go off.

Well, how do you tell when one is about to go off? You have to study them to learn these kinds of things, right?

And when you’re watching all the potential supernovas relatively close to human settlement, and you can’t learn anything more from them until one goes off and potentially causes trouble for people in the neighborhood, you might want to expand the number of stars you’re watching so you can gather more data and make your forecasts more accurate before they’re needed closer to home. And that’s where these folks come in.

Still in progress.

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December 2007

12:16 pm Wednesday
December 26, 2007

2 talked back!

The Reluctant I
by McGehee

 

In this, the first of the exercises mentioned here, the challenge is to write a 600-word story from the first-person point of view, but severely limiting the use of the first-person pronoun. The “I” nevertheless has to be important to the story.

This will indeed be a challenge.

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September 2007

3:45 pm Friday
September 14, 2007

No backtalk

Inorganism
by McGehee

 

Having recently seen I, Robot, I’ve been inspired to write something based on what I see as a more likely evolution of existing technology—one in which robots as conceived by Asimov don’t quite exist. Advanced cyberservants are inevitable, but I see them more likely to be extensions of the persons they serve rather than as potentially distinct entities that just happen to be manufactured. The close integration between the organic source identity and the inorganic extended identity is what will blur the line between “created” life and its “manufactured” image.

As far as I know, Asimov never really integrated the concept of nanotech into his robot stories, and though it played a role in the movie its full potential wasn’t explored. Certainly I’d rather my robots were linked to me than to the robots’ version of Microsoft. “Three Laws Safe” would work better that way, I think.

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June 2007

11:10 am Saturday
June 30, 2007

No backtalk

Medicine Mountain
by McGehee

 

I’ve used this opening sequence in previous story attempts, but finally decided that having the story told from the point of view of a policeman who didn’t even know the victim well, wasn’t the way to go. The victim’s brother, however, was enough of a screw-up that it might make for a more interesting tale, and one in which I could take a freer hand with the ways and means.

By the way, one of the 5 Hat cowboys mentioned in this piece was named Calhoun in the unsuccessful short story that inspired it. I suppose it’s possible he or one of his descendants returned after 1879. One of these days I should try that story again—only, you know, better.

Update, August 26, 2007: I just dug up the hard copy of the original submission of the 5 Hat short story mentioned above; I might just be able to take a crack at telling this story again, in a way that people would actually want to read it.

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March 2006

11:44 am Sunday
March 26, 2006

No backtalk

Wash & Zoë’s Wedding
by McGehee

 

Prior to the release of Serenity, the studio-hosted Browncoats website hosted a number of contests, including one calling for fans’ versions of the vows said by Zoë and Wash when they were married. I couldn’t settle for merely writing vows—I had to write the whole scene.

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September 2005

9:53 am Saturday
September 17, 2005

No backtalk

From the LITTLE SPRINGS POST-RECORD: August 3, 1879
by McGehee

 

Years ago I wrote a story called “The Lynching of Lefty Pross” and submitted it to a magazine that was in the business of publishing Western-themed fiction. It was rejected. But some later stories I tried to write, including Medicine Mountain, have been built around the idea that the 5 Hat cowboys described in this old-style newspaper article, stayed in the West Fork country.

Maybe I should have stopped trying to write those stories after I wrote this piece.

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April 2005

11:26 am Monday
April 25, 2005

No backtalk

Just a Slob Like One of Us
by McGehee

 

Just another post-modern “it sucks to be all-powerful” tale.

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March 2005

12:03 pm Monday
March 28, 2005

No backtalk

Have No Master
by McGehee

 

The “noble wolf” is a predator, people!

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